Bad Fanfiction Reading 5 – Sonic the Hedgehog Darkneess Aprouchs

READ ALONG HERE www.fanfiction.net Sonic was runnin around a field when DR ROBOTNICK came otu of nowhere and attacked Sonic with a giant Robot. "Give me the chaos emeralds" said Eggman. But Sonic Said "NO!" Sonic fight the robot and it's big arm hit Sonic and was about to kill him. Sonic closed his eyes and braced himself for what he thought was the finla blow. Just then a streak of black hit the arm and it missed Sonic. Sonic opened his eyes and saw a Black Hedgehog that looked like Shadow exept he had green in his hair instead of red and has the secret eights chaos emerald around his neck as a necklace. I am Darkness the Hedgehog Sonic (This is my Original Sonic character ) I am Shadow's brother who was a failed expariment, Dr. Eggman destroyed my adopted village and everyone die but me so he gave me shoes like Shadow's cause he thought I might be powerful one day but he didn't know I wanted revenge. OK lets team up and beat eggman together so they attacked and the robot explosded. Sonic and Darkness went back to the city to see Amy, when Amy saw Darkness she forget about being in love with Sonic and was in love with Darkness. Darkness sat down with Amy and begane holding hands. I think you are really cool" said Amy "Yeah" said Darkness, so they started kissing. BLAZE THE CAT Just then some big thing fell from space, it was chaos 2 and got all the 7 chaos emeralds. I know what that was. Tail went to try to fight Chaos 2...but it killed him. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO TAILS ...

25 Comments

  1. “I think you’re cool.”
    “…Yeah.”
    LOL

    Comment by DinahoftheRailroad — February 19, 2010 @ 11:44 am

  2. this is some of the most retarded fan fiction ever made haha

    Comment by DrMario3866 — February 19, 2010 @ 9:25 pm

  3. lmfao this is so fail its a win!!!

    BLAZE THA CAAAAT!

    Comment by GothChilde6969 — February 22, 2010 @ 4:43 am

  4. This Fanficiton is so awesome
    it should be read by Patrick Stewart of someone impotant

    Comment by Tacom4ster — March 2, 2010 @ 3:13 pm

  5. How can you READ that?

    Comment by PenguinCinema — March 18, 2010 @ 4:48 pm

  6. and then they started kissing…….

    :3

    Comment by thespoonchan — March 26, 2010 @ 7:50 pm

  7. this is what its like to go to an anime con.

    Comment by DaftBrian — March 28, 2010 @ 7:32 pm

  8. XD I know… amazing FF.

    Comment by DinahoftheRailroad — March 30, 2010 @ 4:44 pm

  9. This is awful!

    Comment by Turbosonic98 — April 11, 2010 @ 12:37 pm

  10. Is this a real story? Did someone actually think they were being original?

    Comment by Immafurrycat — April 25, 2010 @ 2:21 pm

  11. What would have made this story even more epic than it already is would be if the one part where Knuckles gets the Master Emerald back went, “took the emerald back to his place and fucked it.”

    Comment by AzureClarity — May 20, 2010 @ 5:28 pm

  12. This fan-fiction is horrid.

    Comment by FranticDarkness — May 26, 2010 @ 9:21 pm

  13. lol terrible

    Comment by blackburningdevil1 — June 10, 2010 @ 1:44 pm

  14. annnnnd……….sonic jus forgot about tails i guess.

    Comment by Pizzafication123 — June 20, 2010 @ 9:54 am

  15. Darkneess’s backstory sounds like Bludshot the Hedgehog’s story
    a rocolor ripping off a recolor

    Comment by Gaomon752 — June 28, 2010 @ 11:35 am

  16. “Sonic was said because Tails” LMFAO

    Comment by ShadowFlame7546 — June 30, 2010 @ 8:43 pm

  17. @Immafurrycat Keep in mind that it was probably written by a six-year-old, and no one had the heart to tell him it was shit and he should keep it off the fucking internet.

    Comment by MoonShadowWolfe — July 1, 2010 @ 8:07 pm

  18. oh noez durkn3ss is aprouching! Lol people really need spell checker.

    Comment by ih8makinusernames — July 8, 2010 @ 2:23 pm

  19. you should’ve put in sonamy!!!

    Comment by sonicrocks7543 — July 13, 2010 @ 11:14 am

  20. Wow, Darkness was such a terrible Gary Stu in such a horrible stupid fic, I’d have to say this fic fails so much that it wins. And I thought my fanfictions were terrible.

    Also, BLAAAAZE THE CAAAAAAT!!!!!!!

    Comment by GaseousNobility — July 23, 2010 @ 3:39 pm

  21. Who wouldn’t want revenge after someone destroyed their adopted village?!

    Comment by MRIStudios — July 25, 2010 @ 12:38 pm

  22. lolwut?

    Comment by milo201 — July 30, 2010 @ 2:46 pm

  23. BBBAAGGGHGGHH man fanfiction is SOOOO retarded, I love how BLAZE THE CAT comes out of knowhere….btw, whats the name of this song…??

    Comment by baahhhFATALITY11 — August 9, 2010 @ 2:02 am

  24. oh and don’t you just LOVE how ppl kill tails because they wanna be sonics best friend and sonic just automaticlty forgets about him?

    Comment by Pizzafication123 — August 29, 2010 @ 12:01 pm

  25. Sonic was sad because Tails.

    WRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY~~~

    Comment by blacktigerpaw1 — September 3, 2010 @ 5:26 pm

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